Our screenplay entitled "FAST AND THE CURIOUS" written - as we allege - on paid commission by ANGEL SKYE - has its world premiere excerpt publication below. Email or call us to tell us what you think - and whether ANGEL SKYE and his latest group of allies for a season should be making this movie using our script, scenario and videography directions instead of attempting to re-launch what most of you think is strictly a vanity site based on SKYE's B list performance in one current Lucas Entertainment video.
"THE FAST AND THE CURIOUS" - EXCERPT By DAMON KRUEZER
Script commissioned per order of Angel Hernandez, President, ASG Productions with input by Greg G. aka "Brad Star" 10/14/07
INT. CU OF ANGEL; EQUIPMENT ROOM 168
We see him talking to the automotive detailing shop manager.
ANGEL The forensic guys found a match they faxed over on the partial finger prints found. Has DNA come up with anything on the white slimy stuff?
INT. CU OF BRAD’S FACE; EQUIPMENT ROOM 169
We see him still undressing as he’s talking.
BRAD
NO. Lay the fax on my desk. I’m going on the roof and work out some bad tension alone. I think my Mitsubishi Eclipse detailing is done, and we're good to go.
INT. WS OF BOTH MEN; EQUIPMENT ROOM 170
We see ANGEL nod and move out of frame.
ANGEL
Sure. I’ll let everyone know to stay clear of the roof. The Mitsu looks great!
BRAD moves out of frame a few beats after him as we,DISSOLVE TO: EXT. ROOF – DAY 171
We see BRAD move into frame and looking around then begin doing push ups.
EXT. ROOF - BODY SHOP 172
We see a larger shot of Gary laying on a towel with gray shorts on out of sight from Brad. Gary hears him and gives him his attention. Brad does not see him and continues doing push ups.
EXT. POV OF GARY; ROOF; HAND HELD SHOT 173
We see Brad doing his thing. EXT. CU OF BRAD’S BODY focusing on the 2 star tattoos;
ROOF 174We see a MONTAGE OF POV shots of his body working out.EXT. MS OF GARY; ROOF 175
We see Gary laying on a towel stomach down wearing gray shorts watching.EXT. MS OF BRAD STANDING;
ROOF 176 We see him staring off standing thinking in a "hot" stance unaware Gary is there. He begins rubbing his crotch and pulls his d**k out stroking it.
EXT. CU OF BRAD’S CROTCH; ROOF 177
We see variations of this.EXT. CU OF GARY’S FACE; ROOF 178
We see him watching closely.
EXT. MS OF GARY; ROOF 179
He tries to get a better look and kicks a bottle of water next to his foot.
EXT. CU OF FOOT; ROOF 180
We see his foot kick the bottle.
EXT. WS OF BOTH MEN; ROOF 181
We see Brad quickly react pulling his d**k in his pants. He moves towards the sound and sees Gary.
BRAD
How long have you been here?
EXT. CU OF GARY; ROOF 182We see him all nervous and begins standing.
GARY Long enough to see how big you are. And you are.
EXT. CU OF BRAD; ROOF 183
We see him getting flustered then break into a cute smile.
BRAD
I am what?
EXT. MS OF BOTH MEN; ROOF 184
We see them looking at each other with Brad a bit nervous.
GARY
Big. Umm, you want to work out together?
BRAD
Sounds good. We can spot each other or…do you know how to wrestle?
GARY
Sure, I was on my college team.They begin taking off shirts and shoes just wearing their shorts. They step on the matt and begin wrestling.(DIRECTOR’S NOTE: GET VARIATIONS OF THIS WITH SUGGESTIVE POSITIONS)
SS#5EXT. CU OF A HOLD; ROOF 185
We see them in a wrestling hold where their faces are within kissing range and their eyes looking deep into each other’s eyes yet they are straining their muscles. We see Brad move into to kiss Gary hesitant at first then they go wild.
EXT MS OF BOTH MEN; ROOF 186
We see Brad in control and letting his flood gates open wanting Gary licking him down to his navel rubbing his face and then pulling out Gary’s d**k. THEY BEGIN.EXT. AFTER THEY CUM;
MS OF BOTH MEN 187
They lay wrapped in each other’s arms.
GARY
I have to tell you, I never expected this.
BRAD (chuckling) Neither did I. But I often thought about it…just don't give ANGEL even a hint of this, we've got a race to win with my Mitsu Eclipse!
Copyright ©2007-2008 Kruezer Advanced Media Operations, all rights reserved and not useable until paid in full
Monday, July 28, 2008
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2 comments:
This is better than most Damon U give it a real storyline that makes Angel & Brad look like real people.
Too bad theyre not real people, I hear Brad is on the run from the girlfriend's lawyer for child support payments!
On your website you seem to be saying that Angel Skye is trying to get Howard of Fabscout on the hook to support the comeback of the Slut Garden website...or at least to "forgive" the money Angel owes Howard. Am I reading that right? Why would Fabscout give Angel Skye any consideration at all in view of how horribly Angel has treated you, with his false charges going nowhere fast?
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